Sunday, June 28, 2009

A Red Moon

Scene 1Naomi,Grace and Cheri go to pick blackberries. Then we were lost in the wood. Then it was dark.
Naomi:"Cheri ,Grace I want to go home."
Grace:"But how we can go home?"
everyone:"we don't know."
Scene2 Naomi,Grace, and Cheri walk along in the dark night.Then they have a rest.
Cheri:"I thing I see a ghost!"
Grace:"Don't be silly."
Ghost:"whoo whoo .....!
Naomi:"every body, I thing Cheri is right!run!"
Scene 3: Grace:"don't eat me please."
Then the ghost eats Grace.
Naomi:"Look at the moon.It is red!"
Cheri:"I'm tired I need to have a rest."
Ghost come near Cheri and ate Cheri.
Naomi climbed up the tree and got stuck.
Ghost:"I will eat you up!"
Then the ghost cut my leg.I fall down from the tree and nearly died.
Then Cheri and Grace cut the ghost tummy and come out.Then the ghost died.
Grace and Cheri:crying.
Cheri:"I think I see the way home."
Grace:"Me too let's go!"
Cheri:"How about Naomi?"
Grace:"Just leave her she is dies."
Cheri and Grace walk towards the way home.
Grace:"I think we'll never come back to these woods again."
Cheri:laugh "Me too. let's go."
Naomi:"don't leave me alone."
Grace Cheri:"You won't die."
Naomi:"Yes"
Grace:"let's go home."
everyone: "Yeah."

1 comment:

  1. I'm glad Cheri and Grace let Naomi come home with them!

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